That Dreaded Query Letter: Critique by an Agent

Today I received an agent's critique of my query letter, and it was pretty positive. She said it did a nice job of presenting a complicated plot succinctly. Hooray for that! However, she felt the “stakes” weren't quite high enough. If you've read my previous posts, you know that after Adam Donovan kills a bank robber, … Continue reading That Dreaded Query Letter: Critique by an Agent